The Chi introduction text looks like parts of the Introduction chapter to me at first sight, Chi doesn't have a feature list blurb currently.
When cleaning up the 'front page', we'll likely also consider unifying descriptions between different tools somewhat.
From: escet-dev <escet-dev-bounces@xxxxxxxxxxx> on behalf of Hofkamp, Albert <A.T.Hofkamp@xxxxxx>
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Subject: Re: [escet-dev] Shorten Chi description a bit
Not sure if it's still relevant, but will take a look at things next week.
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Subject: Re: [escet-dev] Shorten Chi description a bit
Hi Bert, Albert,
I fixed the sentence as part of issue #24.
I've opted not to make any other changes at this moment. We can always change it later. I want to start the release review soon.
Dennis
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Onderwerp: Re: [escet-dev] Shorten Chi description a bit
Hi Bert and Albert,
I personally don't mind too much that it is a bit longer than CIF. ToolDef and SeText are shorter as they are supporting languages.
I think Albert wrote this Chi introduction text, so I'll let him be the judge here whether your changes are a good idea or not.
I do see now that "The Chi language has features that allow for easy specification of ." is a sentence that ends too abruptly. If we don't remove that paragraph we should fix that sentence.
Dennis
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Onderwerp: [escet-dev] Shorten Chi description a bit
While working on the manual for the Mac, I noticed that the description of Chi is a bit long, when compared to the description of the other parts of ESCET: https://www.eclipse.org/escet/escet/#intro-chapter-chi
Suggestion for a slight reduction:
Remove line:
This set is relatively easy to explain to non-experts, allowing them to understand the model, and participate in the discussions.
(first paragraph already mentions: easy to use for non-experts)
Remove the two before-last paragraphs:
The Chi toolset allows verification of properties of the actual system by means of simulation, e.g. to optimize the supervisory (logic) control of the system. The Chi language has features that allow for easy specification of . Chi
aims to make the process of verifying properties for large systems effortless.
Tutorials and manuals demonstrate the use of the language for effective modeling of system processes. More detailed modeling of the processes and e.g performance indicators, or custom tailoring them to the real situation, has no inherent
limits.
Bert
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