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Re: [oniro-wg] Editorial change to Oniro Working Group Charter

Hello,

On Monday, January 24, 2022 11:24:32 AM CET Jaroslaw Marek (Jarek) wrote:
> Hello,
> 
> I have one editorial note to  a draft of Oniro Working Group Charter. In the
> text “EFSP” is mentioned 3 times in Specification Committee->Powers and
> Duties. It can be easily deducted from the context as well as Applicable
> Documents section, that EFSP stands for Eclipse Foundation Specification
> Process, but it is nowhere directly indicated. Thus I suggest to modify the
> text as below:
 
> It is:
> 
> l  Work with the related Project Management Committee (PMC) to ensure that
> the EFSP is complied with by all related working group specification
> projects. (…)
 
> To be:
> 
> l  Work with the related Project Management Committee (PMC) to ensure that
> the Eclipse Foundation Specification Process  (EFSP) is complied with by
> all related working group specification projects.
 
> l  Define (if any) customizations to the EFSP. The EFSP with the approved
> customizations is the specification process to be used by all
> specifications related to this working group, and refer for approval by the
> Steering Committee.

Thank you very much for the suggestion. We will have a look at it.

 
> Best regards,
> Jarek
> 
Best Regards

-- 
Agustin Benito Bethencourt
Oniro Program Manager | Eclipse Foundation
Eclipse Foundation: The Community for Open Innovation and Collaboration




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