Mary,
(you need slide numbers)
On slide 6 you say "Made JavaDoc available on Component download pages
- more work is needed" -- what more work is needed?
On slides 7 and 24 you refer the reader to the wiki. The problem with
that is the release review docuware (the slides) is an archival
document. Thus you need to include the contents of those wiki pages
frozen into the slides so that when the wiki changes (as it will), the
archival release review document continues to show what was true at the
1.0 release.
On slide 9: "Serena has a commercial solution" - any clue as it what
that commercial solution is?
On slide 12 you talk about "plug-in points" that aren't real Eclipse
plug-in extension points? Or are they? Could you explain a bit more?
On slide 17 "Further work is underway to harmonize the existing and
future UI elements" -- how can you harmonize with things that don't
exist yet (the future)?
On slide 18: "Summer" -- summer of what year? 2007?
Also on slide 18: I'd really like to see the planned and achieve
milestone dates in a table.
On slide 20: "various [places]" - due to the archival nature of this
document, it would be best to list the places explicitly. Also the
"ongoing ... events" - which ones?
On slide 23: you'll need to include a frozen copy of the IP log with
the final release review slides (archival).
Just a few comments on an otherwise great achievement!
- Bjorn
Mary Ruddy wrote:
Attached
is the Draft Higgins 1.0 Release Review Slide Deck in .ppt and .pdf
formats for your review.
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